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Transport preferences among young people in different countries

Transport preferences among young people in different countries

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The table shows the mode of transportation preferred by younger generation in Great Britain, USA, Germany, and France. From the graph can be seen that car is the most preferred transport among the population studied except for Germany where the preference for car was at 40%. France, on the other hand, had a significant preference for this mode of transportation for about 15% above Great Britain and USA. It is noticeable that motorcycle was not a favourite vehicule, especially in France and Great Britain where it is positioned at 10% respectively. However, young people in North America used 3 times more motorcycles than bycicles. Overall, in Great Britain, USA, Germany, and France, cars and Bycicles were on average, the modes of transport preferred by young adults and motorcycle the least favourite.
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
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6.5
Most key features are identified and compared, but some data lacks accuracy and precision in comparison.
Lexical Resource
6
While some vocabulary related to transportation is used, it lacks variety and sophistication. Repetition of basic terms is evident.
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6.5
The essay features a basic but logical structure; however, transitions between paragraphs and ideas are not always smooth. Cohesive devices are used, but not with precision.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The response contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. Some grammatical errors are present, affecting clarity.

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