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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.

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The underground railway system is extremely ouoular type of transport due to the fact that it is cheap and fast. You can sit on every station and go with comfort. There are a lot of railway systems in the world for example the most popular systems in Japan, USA, France and England. Underground railway systems were created in different time for every country. The newest system is in the USA it was created in 1976 in Washington and in 2001 in Los Angeles. The station which located in Washington is bigger than station in Los Angeles, 146 and 28 kilometres and it is a fact why there are about 150 million people per year in Washington and only 30 million per year in Los Angeles. Maybe you heard this fact about Japan that there are a lot of people in railway stetions in Japan and table presents it very well. There are 2 billion and 50 million people in Tokio and Kyoto per year it is incredible statistics. I will remember you that their summary route are 320 kilometres. There are 1. 2 billion people per year in Paris and 800 million in London per year.
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