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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

academicComparative GraphsBar ChartsElectricity ProductionElectricity ConsumptionInternational Comparison
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
Key features are identified and main trends are noted, but more depth and comparative details could be provided.
Lexical Resource
7
A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately, although there's room to further enhance variety.
Coherence & Cohesion
6
The response provides a clear comparison between the countries and maintains logical sequencing. However, the paragraphing can be improved for better clarity.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The sentences exhibit a range of grammatical structures, but improvements can be made in complex sentence formation.

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