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54. It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. with this statement?

54. It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. with this statement?

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Introduction
Background Information

Thesis Statement

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

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Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Summary of Main Points

Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
5.5
The essay addresses the task but does not fully develop ideas or provide sufficient supporting evidence. The conclusion is somewhat repetitive.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains several spelling errors. There is a lack of variety in word choice, which affects the overall quality.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The essay presents a clear argument but lacks logical flow in some areas. Ideas are not always well-connected, and transitions between points could be improved.
Grammatical Range
5
The essay contains several grammatical errors, including punctuation and sentence structure issues. There is a lack of complex sentence structures.

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