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Convenience of modern transportation shortens the distance between places and people embark on their travel more frequently than it has ever been, whether traveling domestically or aboard beco

Convenience of modern transportation shortens the distance between places and people embark on their travel more frequently than it has ever been, whether traveling domestically or aboard beco

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Conclusion
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Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
6
The essay addresses the task and presents a clear position. However, some points are underdeveloped and lack supporting evidence.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks variety. There are instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect word forms.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The essay presents a clear argument but lacks logical flow and organization. Some ideas are not well connected, making it difficult for the reader to follow the argument.
Grammatical Range
5
There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms and sentence structures. The use of complex sentences is limited.

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