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The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age groups.

The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age groups.

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Overall Band Score: 6.5
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6.5
The main features are generally addressed, but there is a lack of comprehensive details and some inaccuracies in data interpretation.
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The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks variety and sophistication, exhibiting some repetition and inaccuracy.
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The response shows a logical organization and some use of linking devices, but there are instances of misused cohesive devices and unclear referencing.
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Sentence structures are mostly simple or compound with limited complex sentences; some grammatical errors are present.

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