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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.

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Simple Sentence

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Complex Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
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Complex Sentence

Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
7
The task is generally addressed with the key features described. However, specific data is not fully integrated.
Lexical Resource
6.5
The vocabulary range is adequate but lacks sophistication. There is some repetition of phrases.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The writer uses basic cohesive devices but lacks advanced linking words and phrases. Paragraphs are logically organized, but the overview could be more clearly distinguished from the introduction.
Grammatical Range
6
The text demonstrates basic sentence structures with limited complex sentences. Sentence variety needs enhancement.

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