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Check Your Text it's freeThe number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagrams below.
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Introduction
Simple Sentence
Overview
Complex Sentence
Complex Sentence
Body Paragraph 1
Compound Sentence
Simple Sentence
Complex Sentence
Body Paragraph 2
Compound Complex Sentence
Complex Sentence
Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
6
The task addresses some of the key features but lacks detailed description and data accuracy.
Lexical Resource
5
While some topic-related vocabulary is used, there is a lack of variety and attempt at complex words. The words are often repeated, which impacts overall quality.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The text follows a general order but lacks clarity and logical flow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and there is some confusion in the sequence of ideas.
Grammatical Range
5.5
The writing includes simple and compound sentences with occasional complex structures, but errors in tense and structure affect comprehension.
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