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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. with this opinion?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. with this opinion?

essayopinionMusicCultural ExchangeSocial Cohesion
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Introduction
Thesis Statement

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

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Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

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Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
5.5
The essay addresses the task but does not fully develop the argument. Some points are underexplained, and the conclusion is weak.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances of incorrect word forms and collocations.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The essay presents a clear argument but lacks logical flow and organization. Some ideas are not well connected, leading to confusion.
Grammatical Range
5
There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement and incorrect tense usage. The sentence structures are mostly simple.

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