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Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports. Others say that the society should be allowed to freely participate in any activities of their discuss both sides and give opinion

Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports. Others say that the society should be allowed to freely participate in any activities of their discuss both sides and give opinion

academicDiscussionN/ ADangerous SportsGovernment Regulation
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Introduction
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Body Paragraph 2
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Compound Complex Sentence

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Conclusion
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Complex Sentence

Overall Band Score: 4.5
Task Achievement
5
The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in discussing both sides. The opinion is stated but not well-supported.
Lexical Resource
5
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect word choices.
Coherence & Cohesion
4
The essay lacks clear organization and logical flow. Ideas are presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult for the reader to follow the argument.
Grammatical Range
4
There are several grammatical errors, including sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms. The range of sentence structures is limited.

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