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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a negative or positive development?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a negative or positive development?

essay2 Part QuestionsSmartphone UsageChild Development
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Introduction
Background Information

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Thesis Statement

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Final Thought

Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The essay addresses the task by discussing both the positive and negative aspects of smartphone use among children. However, the conclusion could be more definitive.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are instances of awkward phrasing and repetition. Some word choices could be more precise.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The essay presents a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, some ideas could be better linked, and transitions between points could be smoother.
Grammatical Range
6
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are errors in subject-verb agreement and awkward sentence constructions.

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