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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? v.27

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? v. 27
Being happy in life is one of the most significant issues in many individuals' lives. Giving a specific definition of happiness is difficult but still, there are some needs that meeting them help us to achieve happiness and accomplishment in our life. Describing happiness is difficult not because of complexity but because of various type of definition presented by each person. It is obvious that every person has its own experience of happiness and different people feel differently on any specific occasion. For example, one might find happiness in being with family and friends and spending much more time with them but others prefer to spend their time alone or working hard for more achievement which makes them feel content. Thus, it is all about experiences and personalities of people. Although it is difficult to define the happiness precisely, there are some well-known factors which help people to feel more cheerful in life. First of all, healthy and active lifestyle help people mentally and physically to have a happy life which leads them to be more productive and achieving life expectancy. Second of all, wealthy life could partially help people to have a well-being life. For example, a person, who can afford to buy presents for his loved ones, absolutely has experienced more content. To conclude, Happiness is the most essential feeling in everybody' s life and it is difficult to describe it because its definition has changed from person to person but healthy and wealthy life could be considered as an assistant for achieving more well-being in life.
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and accomplishment in our life.

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mentally and
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which leads them to be more productive and achieving
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expectancy. Second of all, wealthy
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IELTS letter Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? v. 27

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  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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