Task Achievement
The essay addresses the task and presents arguments for both sides, but it lacks depth in analysis and development of ideas.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are instances of repetition and some inaccuracies in word choice.
Coherence & Cohesion
The essay presents a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the flow between ideas could be improved, and some transitions are lacking.
Grammatical Range
There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement and incorrect word forms. Sentence structures are mostly simple.