The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. v.2
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. v. 2
Nowadays, both the entertainment and the science industries are flourishing. Many people argue that entertainers deserve more recognition than scientist, while others glorify scientists. As far as I am concerned, science plays a vital role in developing society and should be recognized more than artists.
First and foremost, efforts of scientist help not only an individual, but contribute towards larger parts of the population. New inventions, research and discoveries on various aspects lead to the well-being of many others. For example, gene scissors, invented by one biochemist based in Vilnius pose as a solution to cure incurable diseases and conditions. On the contrary, entertainment provided by various artists is only temporary and usually is dedicated to small groups of individuals.
On the other hand, the entertainers posses the ability to be seen in the media. Their success is based on the sales, the view counts and the time they are on TV. Therefore, they hold the power to influence others which can be used to educate. For instance, Bill Nye is famous for his curiosity promoting Science Show.
To conclude scientists and entertainers are hardly comparable professions. I hold the opinion that the artists do not deserve the attention that they are receiving, however, if they contributed with the scientist both could benefit.
Nowadays, both the entertainment and the science industries are flourishing.
Many
people
argue that entertainers deserve more recognition than
scientist
, while others glorify
scientists
. As far as I
am concerned
, science plays a vital role in developing society and should
be recognized
more than artists.
First
and foremost, efforts of
scientist
help
not
only
an individual,
but
contribute towards larger parts of the population. New inventions, research and discoveries on various aspects lead to the well-being of
many
others.
For example
, gene scissors, invented by one biochemist based in Vilnius pose as a solution to cure incurable diseases and conditions.
On the contrary
, entertainment provided by various artists is
only
temporary and
usually
is dedicated
to
small
groups of individuals.
On the
other
hand, the entertainers posses the ability to be
seen
in the media. Their success
is based
on the sales, the view counts and the time they are on TV.
Therefore
, they hold the power to influence others which can be
used
to educate.
For instance
, Bill
Nye
is
famous
for his curiosity promoting Science
Show
.
To conclude
scientists
and entertainers are hardly comparable professions. I hold the opinion that the artists do not deserve the attention that they are receiving,
however
, if they contributed with the
scientist
both could benefit.
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