Education is the one of the most important things for both boys and girls.
Several people believe that educating both girls and boys in individual schools are more effective, while rest people suppose that coeducation system is more better.
In my opinion, I think coeducation system is good for the society. Now I am going to discuss about what are the benefits of both separate schools and mixed schools.
Firstly, educating boys and girls in gender diversity schools easy to communicate with their opposite gender in real life. This opportunity can be later transferred into their personal lives. For example, If the people working in the company they have to continue communication with other who are working in the same company. If they didn't do that they couldn't be top in their group work even though without being friendly with others, it can be a huge loss for the company.
Secondly, both girls and boys have different abilities to learn different study material, even sport because of that they can help each other to improve their knowledge about subjects also improve their skills in sport.
For example, boys are more talented in cricket more than girls because they usually watch all the cricket matches therefore boys can teach to the girls about how to achieve high marks in cricket and what are the tips to win the game.
On the other hand, some others consider the educating girls and boys separately is best, one of the main reasons for that is studying in this system student lend to be more focussed on studies rather than being distracted to all fantasy of teenage. Nowadays unnecessary relationship is the main reason that students trying to kill themselves even do such harmful things such as suicide, cutting their hands.
Although I think both school system should teach their students how to stay strong in their problems.
In conclusion, educating both types of education system, mixed schools and separate school student can get a different experience in their life.
Education is the one of the most
important
things for both
boys
and girls.
Several
people
believe that
educating
both
girls
and
boys
in individual
schools
are more effective, while rest
people
suppose that coeducation
system
is
more better
.
In my opinion, I
think
coeducation
system
is
good
for the society.
Now
I am going to
discuss about what
are the benefits of both separate
schools
and mixed schools.
Firstly
,
educating
boys
and
girls
in gender diversity
schools
easy to communicate with their opposite gender in real life. This opportunity can be later transferred into their personal
lives
.
For example
, If the
people
working in the
company
they
have to
continue communication with
other
who are working in the same
company
. If they didn't do that they couldn't be top in their group work
even though
without being friendly with others, it can be a huge loss for the
company
.
Secondly
, both
girls
and
boys
have
different
abilities to learn
different
study material, even sport
because
of that they can
help
each
other
to
improve
their knowledge about subjects
also
improve
their
skills
in sport.
For example
,
boys
are more talented in cricket more than
girls
because
they
usually
watch
all the cricket matches
therefore
boys
can teach to the
girls
about how to achieve high marks in cricket and what are the tips to win the game.
On the
other
hand,
some
others consider the
educating
girls
and
boys
separately
is best, one of the main reasons for
that is
studying in this
system
student
lend to be more focussed on studies
rather
than
being distracted
to all fantasy of teenage. Nowadays unnecessary relationship is the main reason that
students
trying to kill themselves even do such harmful things such as suicide, cutting their hands.
Although
I
think
both
school
system
should teach their
students
how to stay strong in their problems.
In conclusion
,
educating
both types of education
system
, mixed
schools
and separate
school
student
can
get
a
different
experience in their life.
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