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"A country’s museums should always be free for people to visit, whatever the visitor’s age, income or nationality. ’ To what level do you agree with this idea? Should museums always be free for all visitors? "

"A country’s museums should always be free for people to visit, whatever the visitor’s age, income or nationality. ’ To what level do you agree with this idea? Should museums always be free for all visitors? "

essayopinionCultural EnrichmentEducationSocial EqualityFinancial Sustainability
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Introduction
Background Information

Thesis Statement

Thesis Statement

Outline Statement

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The essay addresses the task and presents a clear opinion, but it could develop ideas more thoroughly and provide stronger supporting evidence.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks variety and sophistication. Some phrases are repetitive, and there are instances of awkward word choices.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The essay presents a clear argument with a logical structure, but some ideas could be better connected. The transition between points could be smoother.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The essay demonstrates a good command of grammar with a mix of simple and complex sentences. However, there are minor errors that affect clarity.

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