Some would argue that male and female students should be taught in different schools, while others say that they get more advantage if they are allowed to attend the mixed schools. While separate schools maintains the distance between boys and girls as per cultural demand in some countries, I believe that children better understand the opposite gender's wishes and values when they learn together in the same tuition.
On the one hand, separate teaching institutions help a country to maintain the distance between different genders as defined by some traditions. It says that boys and girls should not engage with each other in order to control the emotions of young children and teenagers that significantly change while growing up. For example, most Arabic countries practice this system as it is a part of their culture. However, I believe that this system makes them shy and they cannot understand each other's wishes.
On the other hand, both gender's children get equally benifited by studying in the same tuition because they get to know each other's preferences properly. This is to say that children themselves deal with the physical changes that they are facing and gain more confidence in interacting with individuals of different genders. For instance, most european countries have mixed schools, hence they both are confident enough to interact and respect one-another. Therefore, I think it is more advantageous to teach pupils of different sex in the same school.
In conclusion, although separate schools help some nations to keep the cultural demand in the right order, I believe children of different genders know one- another more properly while learning in the mixed schools.
Some
would argue that male and female students should
be taught
in
different
schools
, while others say that they
get
more advantage if they are
allowed
to attend the mixed
schools
. While separate
schools
maintains the distance between boys and girls as per cultural demand in
some
countries
, I believe that
children
better understand the opposite gender's wishes and values when they learn together in the same tuition.
On the one hand, separate teaching institutions
help
a
country
to maintain the distance between
different
genders as defined by
some
traditions. It says that boys and girls should not engage with each other in order to control the emotions of young
children
and
teenagers
that
significantly
change
while growing up.
For example
, most Arabic
countries
practice this system as it is a part of their culture.
However
, I believe that this system
makes
them
shy and
they cannot understand each other's wishes.
On the other hand
, both gender's
children
get
equally
benifited
by studying in the same tuition
because
they
get
to know each other's preferences
properly
. This is to say that
children
themselves deal with the physical
changes
that they are facing and gain more confidence in interacting with individuals of
different
genders.
For instance
, most
european
countries
have mixed
schools
,
hence
they both are confident
enough
to interact and respect one-another.
Therefore
, I
think
it is more advantageous to teach pupils of
different
sex in the same school.
In conclusion
, although separate
schools
help
some
nations to
keep
the cultural demand in the right order, I believe
children
of
different
genders know one- another more
properly
while learning in the mixed
schools
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes