Life, nowadays become very hectic and difficult to live in most part of the place. People are living in poverty and in such circumstances which make life harder. However, these problems can be catered by happiness, but sometimes, it becomes difficult to understand the mode of happiness. In this essay I will discuss some points to achieve this.
Due to industrialization and busy schedule people tends to forget about themselves. They got used to with the approach of industry to work for 9 to 10 hours with many tons of tasks and assignments to complete before deadline subsequently, which make people leave their habit of healthy lifestyle that, plays a vital role in happiness.
A healthy lifestyle also makes people live longer furthermore, it develops a state of mind by which a person feels more optimistic. If one becomes more optimistic he tends to achieve things more easily and happily. However, individuals don't know to define this state of mind as feelings are harder to define with words.
Furthermore, helping others and to do welfare of needy people also helps a person to feel the sense of achievement like, we can take an example of Abdul Sattar Edhi, who helped the poor, handicapped, orphans and those parents whose children closes the door for them. Edhi helped all these people without earning a penny and lived a back-driven lifestyle yet, happily.
In conclusion, A lifestyle with sort of happiness in it becomes, easier to live rather than a life which has nothing to be optimistic or any sort of achievement in it.
Life, nowadays
become
very
hectic and difficult to
live
in most part of the place.
People
are living in poverty and in such circumstances which
make
life harder.
However
, these problems can
be catered
by happiness,
but
sometimes
, it
becomes
difficult to understand the mode of happiness. In this essay I will discuss
some
points to achieve this.
Due to industrialization and busy schedule
people
tends
to forget about themselves. They
got
used
to with the approach of industry to work for 9 to 10 hours with
many
tons of tasks and assignments to complete
before
deadline
subsequently
, which
make
people
leave
their habit of healthy
lifestyle
that, plays a vital role in happiness.
A healthy
lifestyle
also
makes
people
live
longer
furthermore
, it develops a state of mind by which a person feels more optimistic. If one
becomes
more optimistic he tends to achieve things more
easily
and
happily
.
However
, individuals don't know to define this state of mind as feelings are harder to define with words.
Furthermore
, helping others and to do welfare of needy
people
also
helps
a person to feel the sense of achievement like, we can take an example of Abdul
Sattar
Edhi
, who
helped
the poor, handicapped, orphans and those parents whose children
closes
the door for them.
Edhi
helped
all these
people
without earning a penny and
lived
a back-driven
lifestyle
yet
,
happily
.
In conclusion
, A
lifestyle
with sort of happiness in it
becomes
, easier to
live
rather
than a life which has nothing to be optimistic or any sort of achievement in it.
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