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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v.9

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v. 9
Such are negative consequences of our activities on the environment, many experts agree that destroying the environment poses a direct threat to humanity. As a result, we should tackle this problem with some constructive approaches both individually and governmentally. This essay will discuss some harmful activities for the nature and will come up some solutions to solve or alleviate this problem. Environment-wise, air pollution is terrible issue which occurs when a myriad dangerous quantity of substances are introduced into earth’s atmosphere. Sources about this issue include many gases, which greenhouse gases are the worst air pollutants. These gases are related to ozone layer depletion and global warming directly. Generally, greenhouse gases released when fossil fuel is burned. Moreover, the other underlying causes of the problem is deforestation and destroying natural habitats due to our need for more land to solve overpopulation in metropolitan cities around the world. Governments can address this issue by bringing in new policies to split the population over their cities and people can use green energy instead of fossil fuel. The another environmental problem is the extreme use of plastic which has irreparable damages to the environment and wildlife in particular. Initially, plastics are harmful for animals because they eat it and feed it to their children in mistake. In addition, this material could poison our food chain as many animals eat it in mistake. An effective solution could be recycling all plastics that we use. Governments could encourage people to split up their wastes and also they could build recycle factory around cities. In conclusion, as far as environmental problems are concerned with implementing some solutions for each problem by both government and people could prevent large-scale destruction of the environment and save humankind.
Such are
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negative
consequences of our activities on the
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environment
,
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many
experts
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agree
that destroying the
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environment
poses a direct threat to humanity.
As a result
, we should tackle this
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problem
with
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some
constructive approaches both
individually
and
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governmentally
. This essay will discuss
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some
harmful activities for the nature and will
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come
up
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some
solutions to solve or alleviate this problem.

Environment-wise, air pollution is terrible issue which occurs when a myriad
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dangerous
quantity of substances
are introduced
into earth’s atmosphere. Sources about this issue include
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many
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gases
, which greenhouse
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gases
are the worst air pollutants. These
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gases
are related
to ozone layer depletion and global warming
directly
.
Generally
, greenhouse
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gases
released when fossil fuel
is burned
.
Moreover
, the other underlying causes of the
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problem
is deforestation and destroying natural habitats due to our need for more land to solve overpopulation in metropolitan cities around the world.
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Governments
can address this issue by bringing in new policies to split the population over their cities and
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people
can
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use
green energy
instead
of fossil fuel.

The another environmental
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problem
is the extreme
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use
of plastic which has irreparable damages to the
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environment
and wildlife
in particular
.
Initially
, plastics are harmful for animals
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because
they eat it and feed it to their children in mistake.
In addition
, this material could poison our food chain as
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many
animals eat it in
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mistake
. An effective solution could be recycling all plastics that we
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use
.
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Governments
could encourage
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people
to split up their wastes and
also
they could build recycle factory around cities.

In conclusion
, as far as environmental
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problems
are concerned
with implementing
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some
solutions for each
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problem
by both
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government
and
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people
could
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prevent
large-scale destruction of the
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environment
and save humankind.
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IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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