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Explain some of the ways in which human are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v.2

Explain some of the ways in which human are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v. 2
It is some argued that people are major reason effect on the environment. This essay will issue how to damage to the environment, and the responsibility to protect the environment of both the government and individuals. On the one hand, the government plays a vital role in environmental protection. Our environment is affected by climate change; it brings people a great deal of serious damage, such as floods, prolonged droughts. The government builds dams for citizens to prevention of natural disaster. In addition, factories have to comply with government hygiene regulations because these emissions have a detrimental impact on the environment. Furthermore, cutting down trees illegally is an action leads to environmental degradation. In order to reduce deforestation, the government should impose some new laws against forest clearance. On the other hand, individuals make a significant contribution to protecting the environment. Exhaust gases from private transports are causing severe damage to environmental pollution; therefore, citizens are urged to use means of transport, such as bike cycle, electrical car. For instance, Taiwan is using type of public cycling because it is environmentally friendly. Moreover, everyone is becoming aware of protecting the environment because poor environmental quality will influence human health. To illustrate, Vietnam is one of the nations that has millions of tons of plastic waste, such as bottles, bags; thus, people should shift toward using environmentally friendly products. In conclusion, the problem of protecting the environment has been tacked in many places thanks to the government and ordinary people. The efforts and cooperation of individuals and the government help the environment to be cleaner.
It is
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some
argued that
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people
are major reason effect on the
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environment
. This essay will issue how to damage to the
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environment
, and the responsibility to protect the
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environment
of both the
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government
and individuals.

On the one hand, the
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government
plays a vital role in
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environmental
protection. Our
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environment
is
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affected
by climate
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change
; it brings
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people
a great deal of serious damage, such as floods, prolonged droughts. The
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government
builds dams for citizens to prevention of natural disaster.
In addition
, factories
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have to
comply with
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government
hygiene regulations
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because
these emissions have a detrimental impact on the
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environment
.
Furthermore
, cutting down trees
illegally
is an action leads to
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environmental
degradation. In order to
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reduce
deforestation, the
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government
should impose
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some
new laws against forest clearance.

On the other hand
, individuals
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make
a significant contribution to protecting the
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environment
. Exhaust gases from private transports are causing severe damage to
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environmental
pollution;
therefore
, citizens
are urged
to
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use
means of transport, such as bike cycle, electrical car.
For instance
, Taiwan is using type of public cycling
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because
it is
environmentally
friendly.
Moreover
, everyone is becoming aware of protecting the
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environment
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because
poor
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environmental
quality will influence human health. To illustrate, Vietnam is one of the nations that has millions of tons of plastic waste, such as bottles, bags;
thus
,
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people
should shift toward using
environmentally
friendly products.

In conclusion
, the problem of protecting the
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environment
has
been tacked
in
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many
places thanks to the
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government
and ordinary
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people
. The efforts and cooperation of individuals and the
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government
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help
the
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environment
to be cleaner.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which human are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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