Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development
The two map show center of a small town named Islip in the current time and projection for improvement in the future. In general, town in the future will be much more modernized and provided with new facilities to compare with the town in present time, mainly in the north parts of the town. In the current map, there are few amenities and buildings and whole north part of the town is covered by countryside. There is a straight road passing between shops located on both sides through which it is accessible to go to school located in the south west and to park sited in the south east of the town. Many houses are situated between the path directing to school and parking area in the east. Moving on to the second map, town will be circled around by dual carriageway that will have path to the town on the east side of the map. The school will be expanded slightly, whilst the park will be diminished. New housing area will be constructed near the park and shops in the north will be cleared out in order to make room for new buildings such as, bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area from west to east of the town. The previous site of main road adjacent to the shops will be converted into a pedestrian area in the future.
The two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
center of a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
named
Possible spelling mistake found.
Islip
in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
time and projection for improvement in the future.

In general
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in the future will be much more modernized and provided with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
facilities to compare with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in present time,
mainly
in the north parts of the town.

In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
, there are few amenities and buildings and whole north part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
is covered
by countryside. There is a straight road passing between shops located on both sides through which it is accessible to go to school located in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south west
and to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
sited in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south east
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
are situated
between the path directing to school and parking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
in the east.

Moving on to the second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
will
be circled
around by dual carriageway that will have path to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
on the east side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
map
. The school will
be expanded
slightly
, whilst the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
will
be diminished
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
New
housing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
will
be constructed
near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
and shops in the north will
be cleared
out in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
room for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
buildings such as, bus station, shopping center, car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
housing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
from west to east of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
. The previous site of main road adjacent to the shops will
be converted
into a pedestrian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
area
in the future.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
233 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts