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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

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Introduction
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Body Paragraph 1
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Body Paragraph 2
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Conclusion
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Overall Band Score: 5.5
Task Achievement
6
The essay addresses the task but does not fully develop the ideas or provide sufficient examples. The conclusion is weak.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks variety and precision. Some phrases are awkward or incorrect.
Coherence & Cohesion
5.5
The essay presents ideas but lacks clear logical flow and transitions between points. Some sentences are disjointed, making it hard to follow the argument.
Grammatical Range
5
There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb forms. Sentence structures are often simple.

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