Task Achievement
The essay does not address the task at all. It discusses a completely different topic, failing to provide a relevant response to the prompt.
Lexical Resource
The vocabulary used is basic and does not demonstrate a wide range. There are instances of repetition and lack of topic-related vocabulary.
Coherence & Cohesion
The essay does not address the prompt and lacks a clear structure. The ideas presented are not logically connected to the topic of living in a foreign language environment.
Grammatical Range
The grammatical structures are mostly simple and lack complexity. There are some errors in sentence structure that affect clarity.