Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

essayopinionChoice Overload
Writing Structure
Introduction
Background Information

Supporting Sentence

Unclassified Sentences

Question Paraphrase

Thesis Statement

Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Unclassified Sentences

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Example Sentence

Concluding Sentence

Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Example Sentence

Supporting Sentence

Conditional Sentence

Concluding Sentence

Conclusion
Restatement of Thesis

Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
6.5
The essay addresses the task and presents a clear opinion. However, the arguments could be developed further with more specific examples and evidence to support the claims.
Lexical Resource
6
The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are instances of repetition and some awkward phrasing. The range of vocabulary could be expanded to include more sophisticated terms.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The essay presents a clear argument with a logical flow of ideas. However, some transitions between points could be smoother, and the conclusion lacks a strong summarization of the main arguments.
Grammatical Range
6
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward constructions that detract from clarity.

Additional Details
Full Report
Show CEFR Map
Writing Ideas
Vocabulary
Writing Structure
Users Examples
Users Comments
Check Your Writing
Other Writings