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Check Your Text it's freeThe maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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Introduction
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Overview
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Complex Sentence
Complex Sentence
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Simple Sentence
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Simple Sentence
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Complex Sentence
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Complex Sentence
Overall Band Score: 7
Task Achievement
7
The task is addressed with a clear overview and detailed descriptions. Some key features are summarized well, but additional details and comparisons could enhance the response.
Lexical Resource
7
A good range of vocabulary is used appropriately for the task, although there is some repetition. The choice of words is generally appropriate with occasional errors.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The response demonstrates a logical organization, with distinct sections for each main feature. Some transitions between ideas are smooth, but cohesion could be improved with more varied linking devices.
Grammatical Range
6.5
The writing displays a mix of sentence structures, but some grammatical errors and awkward sentences are present.
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