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The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps present the changes that will be made to the Islip town centre. Overall, the town will be larger and a lot of renovations can be observed. Currently, the centre is close to a countryside. There is a single road dividing shops into two sections and before the shops is a housing area. A school is located in South area and to the East side of the map, there is a park. After a lot of future modifications, the centre will turn out to be an oval shape, leading to the disappearance of the countryside. The single road will disappear and be replaced by a bigger dual carriageway. Moreover, the school will be construct bigger to serve more people. By contrast, the park will be significantly smaller to have enough place for new houses. The road for pedestrians will appear in the central of the oval shape with new facilities such as a bus station and a car park. In a nutshell, the centre will have changed a great deal due to the fact that more facilities will be added, however the park will become smaller which means less place for green trees.
The two maps present the
changes
that will
be made
to the
Islip
town
centre
.
Overall
, the town will be larger and
a lot of
renovations can
be observed
.

Currently
, the
centre
is close to a countryside. There is a single road dividing shops into two sections and
before
the shops is a housing area. A school
is located
in South area and to the East side of the map, there is a park.

After
a lot of
future modifications, the
centre
will turn out to be an oval shape, leading to the disappearance of the countryside. The single road will disappear and
be replaced
by a bigger dual carriageway.
Moreover
, the school will be
construct
bigger to serve more
people
. By contrast, the park will be
significantly smaller
to have
enough
place for new
houses
. The road for pedestrians will appear in the central of the oval shape with new facilities such as a bus station and a car park.

In a nutshell, the
centre
will have
changed
a great deal due to the fact that more facilities will be
added
,
however
the park will become smaller which means less place for green trees.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS academic The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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