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The chart below shows the percentage if households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below shows the percentage if households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The graph displays the percentage of owned and rented houses in the UK compare to Wales from 1918 to 2011. While there are some similarities between the two types, there are also a lot of differences in the trends during the period. Both of the percentage of households remain stable from 1939 to 1953, and equals one another in 1971, at 50%. Then, while the figures of households in rented accommodation have a tendency to go down during the period, from 78% in 1918 to 31% in 2001, that in owned accommodation increase gradually over the years, from 23% up to 69% between 1918 and 2011. However, there is a slight change in trends of the households in 2011. The percentage of owned houses decreases slightly, down to 65%, while that of rented houses increase a little to 35%. Overall, there are similarities and differences in the percentage of households owning and renting accommodation between the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. The trend of owning houses tend to rise while that of rented houses fall significantly over the years.
The graph displays the
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in the UK compare to Wales from 1918 to 2011. While there are
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some
similarities between the two types, there are
also
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differences in the trends during the period.

Both of the
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percentage
of
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households
remain stable from 1939 to 1953, and equals one another in 1971, at 50%. Then, while the figures of
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households
in rented accommodation have a tendency to go down during the period, from 78% in 1918 to 31% in 2001, that in
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owned
accommodation increase
gradually
over the years, from 23% up to 69% between 1918 and 2011.
However
, there is a slight
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change
in trends of the
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households
in 2011. The
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percentage
of
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owned
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houses
decreases
slightly
, down to 65%, while that of rented
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houses
increase a
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little
to 35%.

Overall
, there are similarities and differences in the
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percentage
of
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households
owning and renting accommodation between the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. The trend of owning
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houses
tend to rise while that of rented
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houses
fall
significantly
over the years.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage if households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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181 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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