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The below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development

The given map depicts the centre of a small town called Islip at present and a future plan for the development of the town. A typical town centre of a small town is given. The developmental plan might provide better connectivity in future. Overall, At present apart from main road, roads heading to park and school are not connected. Islip will have major changes like new housing in 2 locations and a dual carriageway which will interlink all the housing and other amenities. Currently, In the south school and park are connected by road, whereas two housing in the town remain disconnected from the roads. Like wise in the north countryside has no road facility. In developmental plan, main road will be replaced by pedestrians only region and construction of new bus station, shopping centre, car park, new housing will be happening in the north of the town where country side is located now and dual carriageway which runs around the town centre. With the construction of dual carriageway whole town will be connected from south the school, park, new housing to the north of the town. 021

IELTS academic The below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The
given
map depicts the
centre
of a
small
town
called
Islip
at present and a future plan for the development of the
town
. A typical
town
centre
of a
small
town
is
given
. The developmental plan might provide better connectivity
in future
.

Overall
, At present apart from main
road
,
roads
heading to
park
and school are not connected.

Islip
will have major
changes
like
new
housing in 2 locations and a dual carriageway which will interlink all the housing and other amenities.

Currently
, In the south school and
park
are connected
by
road
, whereas two housing in the
town
remain disconnected from the
roads
. Like wise in the north countryside has no
road
facility.

In developmental plan, main
road
will
be replaced
by pedestrians
only
region and construction of
new
bus station, shopping
centre
, car
park
,
new
housing will be happening in the north of the
town
where country side
is located
now
and dual carriageway which runs around the
town
centre
. With the construction of dual carriageway whole
town
will
be connected
from south the school,
park
,
new
housing to the north of the
town. 021
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resources: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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