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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words v.2

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the ten countries producing and consuming the most electricity in 2014. In general, it can be seen that the electricity production and consumption in China and the U. S were multiple times higher than those in other nations. In addition, while the common pattern was production rate being larger than consumption rate, the opposite was true for Germany. In details, Chine topped the list with almost 5400 billion kWh produced and about 5320 kWh used. This was followed by the U. S with the production of 4099 billion kWh and consumption of nearly 3900 billion kWh. Top 5 enlisted Russia, Japan and India, respectively with significantly smaller figures for both consumption and production. Canada, at number 6, produce 619 billion kWh and used 500 billion kWh while the figures for Brazil and France were comparable around the 500 and 400 billion kWh marks. Germany was the exception with slightly more electricity consumed than produced (582 billion kWh versus 526 billion kWh). Lastly, Korea finished the top 10 with both rates below 500 billion
The bar chart illustrates the ten countries producing and consuming the most electricity in 2014.

In general
, it can be
seen
that the electricity production and
consumption
in China and the U. S were multiple times higher than those in other nations.
In addition
, while the common pattern was production rate being larger than
consumption
rate, the opposite was true for Germany.

In
details
, Chine topped the list with almost 5400
billion
kWh produced and about 5320 kWh
used
. This
was followed
by the U. S with the production of 4099
billion
kWh and
consumption
of
nearly
3900
billion
kWh. Top 5 enlisted Russia, Japan and India,
respectively
with
significantly smaller
figures for both
consumption
and production.

Canada, at number 6, produce 619
billion
kWh and
used
500
billion
kWh while the figures for Brazil and France were comparable around the 500 and 400
billion
kWh marks. Germany was the exception with
slightly
more electricity consumed than produced (582
billion
kWh versus 526
billion
kWh).
Lastly
, Korea finished the top 10 with both rates below 500
billion
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

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176 words
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