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Essay topics: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

Essay topics: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The chart compared the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in two nations from 1918 to 2011. It is clear from the chart that the rate of households in owned was increased significantly. In addition, the percentage of renting household of people in two nations was highest in 1918. In 1918, the figure for households in rented accommodation was highest, at 77% whereas the number for households in owned was lowest, at only 22%. From 1939 to 1953, the amounts for households in rented were remained, at above 69%. At the same time, the rates for households in owned were significant equally lower, at only 31%. In 1961, the number of renting households was witnessed a decrease, stood at 59% while the figure for buying houses was rose to above 40%. In 1971, the figures for renting and owning were equal at 50%. In 1981 and 1991, 60% and 68% of the total people were own a house respectively, compared to the numbers renting a house, at 40% in 1981 and 32% in 1991. In 2011, the figure for owning house was slightly lower, at 64% while the rate for renting rose insignificantly to 37%.
The chart compared the proportion of
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in
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owned
and rented accommodation in two nations from 1918 to 2011.

It is
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clear
from the chart that the rate of
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households
in
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owned
was increased
significantly
.
In addition
, the percentage of
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renting
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household
of
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people
in two nations was highest in 1918.

In 1918, the
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figure
for
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households
in rented accommodation was highest, at 77% whereas the number for
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households
in
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owned
was lowest, at
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only
22%. From 1939 to 1953, the amounts for
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households
in rented
were remained
, at above 69%. At the same time, the rates for
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households
in
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owned
were significant
equally
lower, at
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only
31%. In 1961, the number of
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renting
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households
was witnessed
a decrease, stood at 59% while the
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figure
for buying
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houses
was rose to above 40%.

In 1971, the
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figures
for
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renting
and owning were equal at 50%.
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In
1981 and 1991, 60% and 68% of the total
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people
were
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own
a
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house
respectively
, compared to the numbers
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renting
a
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house
, at 40% in 1981 and 32% in 1991.
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In
2011, the
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figure
for owning
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house
was
slightly
lower, at 64% while the rate for
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renting
rose
insignificantly
to 37%.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic Essay topics: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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