Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v. 107 v.33
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? v. 107 v. 33
In the modern days people are having numerous choices in their lives, from food, clothing, education as well as communication. Indeed, I agree with this viewpoint, because technology has changed our lives over the years in a very comfortable and convenient manner.
Firstly, in the education people has more options to choose nowadays rather than in the past, because of their interest to learn and work in different sectors. In olden times, the most popular studies were the medical or the engineering, whereas other courses did not have much scope and recognition. Nowadays, courses like art, fashion designing, charted accounts and others have become popular and also gaining more support from students and parents. In addition to this, in the past, there were only limited channels on the television to watch by the people. However, these days there are a number of channels, websites and videos that provide entertainment to humans. For instance, when I was a child, we used to have only 3 animation channels like cartoon network, pogo and Disney, whereas now thousands of series and movies are available through services like Netflix, Prime and Hotstar.
Alongside, the technology has influenced the communication system greatly. Although 10 years back even if a person has to pass an urgent information to his family or relatives, it is done either through telegrams or landline phones were signals were improper. Whereas, with the development of the technology this has changed vastly, where people are able to communicate through mobile phones, emailing and chatting via online like Facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram at an easy pace. For example, last week at our office, we received a mail regarding the urgent need of blood for a patient in Apollo hospital and this message was passed on through WhatsApp groups. Indeed, many people have responded to this message and the person received the blood immediately.
To conclude, the current generation is blessed with many facilities and options, so that they could pick up the one’s they like to do and live their life as they wish.
In the modern days
people
are having numerous choices in their
lives
, from food, clothing, education
as well
as communication.
Indeed
, I
agree
with this viewpoint,
because
technology has
changed
our
lives
over the years in a
very
comfortable and convenient manner.
Firstly
, in the education
people
has
more options to choose nowadays
rather
than in the past,
because
of their interest to learn and work in
different
sectors. In olden times, the most popular studies were the medical or the engineering, whereas other courses did not have much scope and recognition. Nowadays, courses like art, fashion designing, charted accounts
and others
have become popular and
also
gaining more support from students and parents.
In addition
to this, in the past, there were
only
limited channels on the television to
watch
by the
people
.
However
, these days there are a number of channels, websites and videos that provide entertainment to humans.
For instance
, when I was a child, we
used
to have
only
3 animation channels like cartoon network,
pogo
and Disney, whereas
now
thousands of series and movies are available
through
services like Netflix, Prime and
Hotstar
.
Alongside, the technology has influenced the communication system
greatly
. Although 10 years back even if a person
has to
pass
an urgent information
to his family or relatives, it
is done
either
through
telegrams or landline phones
were signals were
improper. Whereas, with the development of the technology this has
changed
vastly
, where
people
are able to communicate
through
mobile phones, emailing and chatting via online like Facebook, WhatsApp and Instagram at an easy pace.
For example
, last week at our office, we received a mail regarding the urgent need of blood for a patient in Apollo hospital and this message
was passed
on
through
WhatsApp groups.
Indeed
,
many
people
have responded to this message and the person received the blood immediately.
To conclude
, the
current
generation
is blessed
with
many
facilities and options,
so
that they could pick up the one’s they like to do and
live
their life as they wish.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes