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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v. 100 v.27

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? v. 100 v. 27
In the current generation, we are having many options to choose. While some people believe that. This essay will argue that having many options is advantageous or a drawback. I completed agree that having many options is a positive side. There are negatives in having too many possibilities. Firstly, people will become lazy, as there are many options to choose. Secondly, they lack interest in doing a task or a job, because of too many options. Finally, it will make some pupil to get confused over a selection of any item or deciding what to do. For example, in todays world we are having many alternatives in dishes, customer will get confused to decide what to select. Thus, these issues lead to negative impact of having choices. Although, there is a positive side of having too many options. Like, they can find an alternative which makes them happier. In addition, they will never get bored of having too many options. Moreover, the person can decide his or her career in order to live a prosperous life. For example, in this era, where internet is a major concern, it gives user with many options like he or she can listen to music, can stream online videos or play games which help them in passing the time. Therefore, the mentioned reasons will provide advantages of having too many choices. To conclude, this essay is arguing about the current era is having too many options. In my opinion, having too many choices makes people happier.
In the
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generation, we are
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many
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options
to choose. While
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people
believe that. This essay will argue that
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having
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many
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options
is advantageous or a drawback. I completed
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agree
that
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having
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many
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options
is a
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positive
side.

There are negatives in
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having
too
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many
possibilities.
Firstly
,
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people
will become lazy, as there are
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many
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options
to choose.
Secondly
, they lack interest in doing a task or a job,
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because
of too
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many
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options
.
Finally
, it will
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make
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some
pupil to
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get
confused over a selection of any item or deciding what to do.
For example
, in
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todays
world we are
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having
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many
alternatives in dishes, customer will
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get
confused to decide what to select.
Thus
, these issues lead to
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negative
impact of
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having
choices.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, there is a
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positive
side of
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too
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options
. Like, they can find an alternative which
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makes
them happier.
In addition
, they will never
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get
In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".
bored of
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having
too
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many
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options
.
Moreover
, the person can decide
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his or her
career in order to
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live
a prosperous life.
For example
, in this era, where internet is a major concern, it gives user with
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many
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options
like he or she can listen to music, can stream online videos or play games which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them in passing the time.
Therefore
, the mentioned reasons will provide advantages of
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having
too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
choices.

To conclude
, this essay is arguing about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
era is
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having
too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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options
. In my opinion,
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having
too
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many
choices
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
happier.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? v. 100 v. 27

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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