People have different views about the right of young children to make their own decision in their life. While some people think that let children do everything they want lead to the appearance of selfish people in a society, I think that trend will create a independence generation.
There are some evidences dedicating that allowing the young to choose their daily routine such as choosing food, clothes, and unwind activities could make they only think about themselves. For example, parents nowadays always spoil their children and try to do everything they require to satisfied the children. As a result, children tend to get used with being an apple of their parents' s eyes, which develop to some detrimental behaviors when they have to become a part of society when they grow up.
However, I strongly believe that letting children decide freely bring a huge amount of benefit for not only themselves but also their parents and society. Firstly, having the right to do their own form just a unimportant thing such as choosing the color for their socks could help children be more confident and not rely too much on their parents. In addition, it has positive impact to the young because they feel being respect by their parents, which can narrow the generation gap between the children and the parents. Secondly, if the children have to make the decision by themselves and express their thinking about what they choose, they will develop the logical thinking and build their personality, for example taking charge for what they have done.
In conclusion, it seem to me that children could get a lot of benefit from having a right to make a decision themselves.
People
have
different
views about the right of young
children
to
make
their
own
decision in their life. While
some
people
think
that
let
children
do everything they want lead to the appearance of selfish
people
in a society, I
think
that trend will create
a
independence generation.
There are
some
evidences dedicating that allowing the young to choose their daily routine such as choosing food, clothes, and unwind activities could
make
they
only
think
about themselves.
For example
,
parents
nowadays always spoil their
children
and try to do everything they require
to satisfied
the
children
.
As a result
,
children
tend to
get
used
with being an apple of their
parents&
#039; s eyes, which develop to
some
detrimental behaviors when they
have to
become a part of society when they grow up.
However
, I
strongly
believe that letting
children
decide
freely
bring a huge amount of benefit for not
only
themselves
but
also
their
parents
and society.
Firstly
, having the right to do their
own
form
just
a
unimportant thing such as choosing the color for their socks could
help
children
be more confident and not rely too much on their
parents
.
In addition
, it has
positive
impact to the young
because
they feel being respect by their
parents
, which can narrow the generation gap between the
children
and the
parents
.
Secondly
, if the
children
have to
make
the decision by themselves and express their thinking about what they choose, they will develop the logical thinking and build their personality,
for example
taking charge for what they have done.
In conclusion
, it
seem
to me that
children
could
get
a lot of
benefit from having a right to
make
a decision themselves.
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