People have different views about whether children should have freedom to decide what they want to do with daily problems. While some people disagree with the idea of allowing offspring to make their own decisions, I believe that children should have liberty to do this.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against letting children make own choices. Firstly, children are too young to fully understand the consequences after each activity they do. As a result, they may hurt themselves. For example, when two children have a big conflict, if adults do not stop it immediately, they might end up being injured. Secondly, children may grow up with selfish - just think for themselves. This is mostly because they are let to do whatever they want, such as eating all good dishes in the meal without thinking that their parents have nothing to eat.
On the other hand, I think that it is more beneficial for children to choose how to solve everyday matters. To begin with, children allowed to do something under reasonable control are more creative than those under strict observation of parents. This means that in the future they could tackle with difficulties easier due to various solutions they may give out. Besides, the ability to make decisions is an essential skill to become a good leader. Nowadays, we have numerous options in doing one work and we have to choose the best one, so certainly freely decision-making at the early age could help us.
In conclusion, I can understand why people might not want children to have own choices, but it seems to me that freedom in choosing what they do need to be encouraged.
People
have
different
views about whether
children
should have freedom to decide what they want to do with daily problems. While
some
people
disagree with the
idea
of allowing offspring to
make
their
own
decisions, I believe that
children
should have liberty to do this.
On the one hand, there are
clear
ethical arguments against letting
children
make
own
choices.
Firstly
,
children
are too young to
fully
understand the
consequences after
each activity they do.
As a result
, they may hurt themselves.
For example
, when two
children
have a
big
conflict, if adults do not
stop
it immediately, they might
end
up
being injured
.
Secondly
,
children
may grow up with selfish
-
just
think
for themselves. This is
mostly
because
they are
let
to do whatever they want, such as eating all
good
dishes in the meal without thinking that their parents have nothing to eat.
On the other hand
, I
think
that it is more beneficial for
children
to choose how to solve everyday matters. To
begin
with,
children
allowed
to do
something under reasonable control are more creative than those under strict observation of parents. This means that in the future they could tackle with difficulties easier due to various solutions they may give out.
Besides
, the ability to
make
decisions is an essential
skill
to become a
good
leader. Nowadays, we have numerous options in doing one
work and
we
have to
choose the best one,
so
certainly
freely
decision-making at the early age could
help
us.
In conclusion
, I can understand why
people
might not want
children
to have
own
choices,
but
it seems to me that freedom in choosing what they do need to
be encouraged
.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes