Some people believe that allowing children make their own choices on everyday matters( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1
Some people believe that allowing children make their own choices on everyday matters( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. v. 1
One common area of debate among parents is the extent to which children should be trusted to make their own choices and, the potential impact they will have in their sense of responsibility. Although, decision-making skills will help in some ways, I believe parents should dictate their decisions for children in order to make them aware of others.
On the one hand, children who have been allowed to make their own decisions will eventually develop a sense of responsibility. For instance, if parents pick out your clothes, then you do not need to check weather forecasts, and make the choices or concerns about the trends in fashion. Over time, they will likely become dependent on their parents. Later in life, those children will not have developed any skills because of their parents, which smother them with attention and make the majority of their decisions for them. Contrast this with children, who pick out their own clothes, they will have to consider these factors carefully and it will make them responsible when it comes to shopping, and taking care of their wardrobe.
On the other hand, I still personally believe that parents should make the majority of their decisions for children to make them aware of others. For example, some parents have the logical and ethical choices to be vegetarian and they force their children to do the same. This can have a positive effect not only on their individual lives, but on the environment. This is a learning opportunity for parents to teach their children about ethics. They can also make the argument that the industrial farming is inhumane and animals should be treated with more respects. Thus, this will have a carry-over effect resulting in the children growing up to be more thoughtful towards others.
In conclusion, In my opinion, parents should make the majority of their decisions for children, so that, they can be more empathetic. They should work with teacher in their efforts to raise conscientious future citizens.
One common area of debate among
parents
is the extent to which
children
should
be trusted
to
make
their
own
choices and, the potential impact they will have in their sense of responsibility. Although, decision-making
skills
will
help
in
some
ways, I believe
parents
should dictate their
decisions
for
children
in order to
make
them aware of others.
On the one hand,
children
who have been
allowed
to
make
their
own
decisions
will
eventually
develop a sense of responsibility.
For instance
, if
parents
pick out your clothes, then you do not need to
check
weather forecasts, and
make
the choices or concerns about the trends in fashion. Over time, they will likely become dependent on their
parents
. Later in life, those
children
will not have developed any
skills
because
of their
parents
, which smother them with attention and
make
the majority of their
decisions
for them. Contrast this with
children
, who pick out their
own
clothes, they will
have to
consider these factors
carefully
and it will
make
them responsible when it
comes
to shopping, and taking care of their wardrobe.
On the other hand
, I
still
personally
believe that
parents
should
make
the majority of their
decisions
for
children
to
make
them aware of others.
For example
,
some
parents
have the logical and ethical choices to be
vegetarian and
they force their
children
to do the same. This can have a
positive
effect not
only
on their individual
lives
,
but
on the environment. This is a learning opportunity for
parents
to teach their
children
about ethics. They can
also
make
the argument that the industrial farming is inhumane and animals should
be treated
with more respects.
Thus
, this will have a carry-over effect resulting in the
children
growing up to be more thoughtful towards others.
In conclusion
, In my opinion,
parents
should
make
the majority of their
decisions
for
children
,
so
that, they can be more empathetic. They should work with teacher in their efforts to raise conscientious future citizens.
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