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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v.1

Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 1
English is fast becoming a global language. As a result, it is predicted by some language experts that the entire human population will speak one common language in the years to come. I believe that this is going to be a positive development. By providing more business opportunities to people across the globe, and bringing advancements in science and technology, it will serve as a tool for future human progress. Firstly, having a common medium of interaction will boost business all over the world as it will obviate the language barrier. This universal language will facilitate businessmen in far away countries to explore hidden markets that were not accessible before, thereby allowing Asian traders, for instance, to sell their products in distant markets such as Africa with the help of a common language. An illustration of this can be seen in Europe where governments have introduced English as a common language for all the residents. Consequently, gross domestic product of these countries have observed an exponential growth. So, if the countries need to progress economically in the future, they will adopt a common medium of communication. To add further credence to my assertion, the globalization of a single language will bring fruitful results in science and technology as scientists of different continents will be able to interact with each other, allowing them to share their ideas and experiences, and paving the pathway for future innovations. Furthermore, by storing scientific knowledge in a common language, it will help scientists to have unlimited access to the scientific data, which was not accessible before due to language hurdles, ultimately leading to more inventions. Hence, alleviating the language hurdles for the science community can lead to unprecedented scientific progress. In conclusion, by allowing corporations to communicate and trade globally, and providing smooth and easy access of scientific data to the experts, a single medium of language will ensure continuous human progress in the future.
English is
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becoming a global
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.
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is predicted
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some
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experts that the entire human population will speak one
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common
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language
in the years to
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come
. I believe that this is going to be a
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positive
development. By providing more business opportunities to
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people
across the globe, and bringing advancements in science and technology, it will serve as a tool for
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future
human progress.

Firstly
, having a
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common
medium of interaction will boost business all over the world as it will obviate the
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language
barrier. This universal
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language
will facilitate businessmen in far away countries to explore hidden markets that were not accessible
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before
, thereby allowing Asian traders,
for instance
, to sell their products in distant markets such as Africa with the
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help
of a
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common
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language
. An illustration of this can be
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seen
in Europe where
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governments
have introduced English as a
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common
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language
for all the residents.
Consequently
, gross domestic product of these countries have observed an exponential growth.
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So
, if the countries need to progress
economically
in the
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future
, they will adopt a
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common
medium of communication.

To
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add
further
credence to my assertion, the globalization of a single
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language
will bring fruitful results in science and technology as scientists of
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different
continents will be able to interact with each other, allowing them to share their
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ideas
and experiences, and paving the pathway for
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future
innovations.
Furthermore
, by storing
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scientific
knowledge in a
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common
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language
, it will
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help
scientists to have unlimited access to the
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scientific
data, which was not accessible
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before
due to
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language
hurdles,
ultimately
leading to more inventions.
Hence
, alleviating the
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language
hurdles for the science community can lead to unprecedented
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scientific
progress.

In conclusion
, by allowing corporations to communicate and trade globally, and providing smooth and easy access of
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scientific
data to the experts, a single medium of
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language
will ensure continuous human progress in the
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future
.
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IELTS essay Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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