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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 1
Shifting base to a whole new country is becoming familiar with this fast-changing world. However, people should take into account several drawbacks in social and pragmatic problems before moving to a new place. The first and foremost issue is probably the language barriers. Even though you have a good basement, the different accents and the cultural traditions may classify you as a tourist and thus, you may as well being charged twice as that of what the locals pay. In some daily-life situations, you may have to use body language to express your needs and wants, which will put a damper to your day-to-day interactions with the locals. Since speaking is the most common way to communicate, your social life may be affected significantly. Being a foreigner also hinder your opportunity of getting a well-paid job. In the recruiter's perspective, they would prefer a native speaker who speaks the language fluently and understands thoroughly the country's tradition rather than someone who is trying to make a transition from tourists to locals. Furthermore, foreign human resources may be treated unequally due to their lack of knowledge in labour law. In conclusion, although globalization makes country's barriers eliminated, I strongly believe that the migrants still have to undergo hardships in both daily conversations and real-life issues when living aboard.
Shifting base to a whole new country is becoming familiar with this
fast
-changing world.
However
,
people
should take into account several drawbacks in social and pragmatic problems
before
moving to a new place.

The
first
and foremost issue is
probably
the language barriers.
Even though
you have a
good
basement, the
different
accents and the cultural traditions may classify you as a tourist and
thus
, you may
as well
being charged
twice as that of what the locals pay. In
some
daily-life situations, you may
have to
use
body language to express your needs and wants, which will put a damper to your day-to-day interactions with the locals. Since speaking is the most common way to communicate, your social life may be
affected
significantly
.

Being a foreigner
also
hinder your opportunity of getting a well-paid job. In the recruiter's perspective, they would prefer a native speaker who speaks the language
fluently
and understands
thoroughly
the country's tradition
rather
than someone who is trying to
make
a transition from tourists to locals.
Furthermore
, foreign human resources may
be treated
unequally
due to their lack of knowledge in
labour
law.

In conclusion
, although globalization
makes
country's barriers eliminated, I
strongly
believe that the migrants
still
have to
undergo hardships in both daily conversations and real-life issues when living aboard.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
217 words
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