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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause severe social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause severe social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 1
Many people migrate to foreign countries in search of better work and living environments. Living in such countries where you have to use an entirely unknown language leads to difficulty in social and practical scenarios. This essay will argue that although there are many issues arising from the language barriers, these are not so serious that they cannot be resolved. In my opinion, although language barriers may create many issues, these are not so serious that they cannot be resolved. The practice of shifting base to a new country is common amongst all classes of people. It is obvious that they will encounter problems when it comes to conversing with the local people and may also face similar issues at work. As they do not know how to speak the local dialect, their ability to socialise and perform various day to day activities will be hampered. For example, shopping in the vegetable market may seem a huge task. Thus living in such countries where one ought to speak the country’s native language is certainly is certainly going to be challenging at least in the first few months. There are multiple factors that one must consider prior to moving to a new land. The factors will help to cope up with the language barrier. Prior to moving to a foreign land, one must prepare oneself for what lies ahead. For example, before migrating to Germany where the majority speaks German, one must get acquainted with the basics of the language. In this age of the internet and online forums, learning a new language is easier than ever before. Taking help of one’s own compatriots living abroad is another way to overcome this problem. In conclusion, I absolutely concur with the notion that living in another country where conversing in the local language is a must is troublesome, but this trouble is often short lived and brief and can be taken care of by making prior preparations and seeking help from the natives. Do you have an essay on this topic? Submit it below in the comments for a free band score estimate.
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migrate to foreign
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countries
in search of better work and
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living
environments.
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in such
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countries
where you
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have to
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use
an
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language
leads to difficulty in social and practical scenarios. This essay will argue that although there are
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many
issues arising from the
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language
barriers, these are not
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so
serious that they cannot
be resolved
.

In my opinion, although
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language
barriers may create
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many
issues, these are not
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so
serious that they cannot
be resolved
. The practice of shifting base to a new
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country
is common amongst all classes of
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people
. It is obvious that they will encounter problems when it
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to conversing with the local
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people
and may
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socialise
and perform various
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day to day
activities will
be hampered
.

For example
, shopping in the vegetable market may seem a huge task.
Thus
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living
in such
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countries
where one ought to speak the
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country’s
native
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language
is
certainly
is
certainly
going to be challenging at least in the
first
few months. There are multiple factors that one
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must
consider prior to moving to a new land. The factors will
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help
to cope up with the
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language
barrier. Prior to moving to a foreign land, one
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must
prepare oneself for what lies ahead.

For example
,
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before
migrating to Germany where the majority speaks German, one
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must
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get
acquainted with the basics of the
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language
. In this age of the internet and online forums, learning a new
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language
is easier than ever
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before
. Taking
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help
of one’s
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own
compatriots
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living
abroad is another way to overcome this problem.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
concur with the notion that
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living
in another
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country
where conversing in the local
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language
is a
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must
is troublesome,
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but
this trouble is
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often
short
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lived
and brief and can
be taken
care of by making prior preparations and seeking
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help
from the natives. Do you have an essay on this topic? Submit it below in the comments for a free band score estimate.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause severe social problems as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
351 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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