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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.6

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 6
It is true that living in a foreign country can cause several problems, especially when you need to speak their own language. Although you could deal with problems without knowing the language, I personally agree that there could be several issues. On the one hand, when it comes to communication, there are more important factors than language skills. First, if you have the willingness to mingle with the local community, you would have more chance of getting help from the locals. It is said that the majority of people do not mind helping foreigners, furthermore, if you show them your passion to be part of their community, they would try their best to help you out. Second, another important factor is body language, such as gesture and facial expression. In many cases, you would not find any difficulty dealing with simple tasks by expressing what you need through body language. For example, if you do not reach a bottle of milk on the top shelf in the supermarket, you can simply ask for help of a clerk with a smile and pointing the bottle. Such gesture is easy to grasp, and that does not need any specific language skills. On the other hand, I believe there can be more problems by not having the language skills. Firstly, if you cannot speak it fluently then It would be different to have local friends. the first step to be friends with anyone is that starting small talk, from asking simple questions and sharing some information to introducing themselves. However, because of the level of your language, you are not able to start the conversation at first and you would not even have the chance to make friends with local people. Second, it would be difficult to get the information you might need. Information related to their bank accounts or houses need to be accepted clear enough so that there would be no problems about these in the future, however, lack of the language skills can cause the problems with understanding and you may miss the opportunity you could have got also it would lead you to be in a trouble.
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need
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language
. Although you could deal with
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problems
without knowing the
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language
, I
personally
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agree
that there could be several issues.

On the one hand, when it
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comes
to communication, there are more
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important
factors than
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language
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skills
.
First
, if you have the willingness to mingle with the
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local
community, you would have more chance of getting
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help
from the
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locals
. It
is said
that the majority of
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people
do not mind helping foreigners,
furthermore
, if you
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show
them your passion to be part of their community, they would try their best to
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help
you out. Second, another
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important
factor is body
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language
, such as gesture and facial expression. In
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many
cases, you would not find any difficulty dealing with simple tasks by expressing what you
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need
through body
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language
.
For example
, if you do not reach a bottle of milk on the top shelf in the supermarket, you can
simply
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ask for
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help
of a clerk with a smile and pointing the bottle. Such gesture is easy to grasp, and that does not
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need
any specific
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language
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skills
.

On the other hand
, I believe there can be more
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problems
by not having the
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language
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skills
.

Firstly
, if you cannot speak it
fluently
then It would be
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different
to have
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local
friends.
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the
first
step to be friends with anyone is that starting
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small
talk, from asking simple questions and sharing
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some
information to introducing themselves.
However
,
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because
of the level of your
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language
, you are not able to
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start
the conversation at
first
and you would not even have the chance to
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make
friends with
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local
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people
. Second, it would be difficult to
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get
the information you might
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need
. Information related to their bank accounts or
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houses
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need
to be
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accepted
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clear
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enough
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so
that there would be no
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problems
about these in the future,
however
, lack of the
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language
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skills
can cause the
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problems
with understanding and you may miss the opportunity you could have
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got
also
it would lead you to be in a trouble.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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