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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.55

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 55
It is true that when moving to live in others countries speaking a foreign language people may face some difficulties. While I agree this can bring about several social matters, I believe that the development of technology has erased practical problems. On the one hand, there are various reasons why word barrier leads to serious social issues. Firstly, people can easily misunderstand each other if they do not fully understand every word they speak. As a consequence, people tend to have quarrels more frequently, and in the end immigrants may be separated from the native. Secondly, poor speaking foreign language skill prevents you from comprehending overseas culture, which is essential to become a real citizen of that country. For example, Americans are likely to associate people who avoid eye contact as unfriendly, insecure, by contrast, the Japanese lower their eyes when they speak to show a gesture of respect. Thus, if you do something wrong just by chance, you might let them down. On the other hand, the growth in technology makes it easier to tackle with practical problems after immigrating to countries where speak foreign word. To begin with, people have developed numerous websites which contain information, such as the bus route, the map, etc. This means that you need not to ask a native speaker to find the location you want to reach. Besides, if you want to speak with foreigners, you do not have to know their vocabulary, just use the translator on your phone and then express your idea. Thus, issues in daily activities can overcome without any troubles. In conclusion, although social matters may be serious in today life, we seem to deal better with real issues than ever before.
It is true that when moving to
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live
in others countries speaking a foreign language
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people
may face
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some
difficulties. While I
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agree
this can bring about several social matters, I believe that the development of technology has erased practical problems.

On the one hand, there are various reasons why word barrier leads to serious social issues.
Firstly
,
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people
can
easily
misunderstand each other if they do not
fully
understand every word they
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speak
. As a consequence,
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people
tend to have quarrels more
frequently
, and in the
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end
immigrants may
be separated
from the native.
Secondly
, poor speaking foreign language
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skill
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prevents
you from comprehending overseas culture, which is essential to become a real citizen of that country.
For example
, Americans are likely to associate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who avoid eye contact as
unfriendly
, insecure, by contrast, the Japanese lower their eyes when they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
to
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show
a gesture of respect.
Thus
, if you do something
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wrong
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just
by chance, you might
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let
them down.

On the other hand
, the growth in technology
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makes
it easier to tackle with practical problems after immigrating to countries where
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speak
foreign word. To
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begin
with,
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people
have developed numerous websites which contain information, such as the bus route, the map, etc. This means that you need not
Did you mean "ask"?
to ask
a native speaker to find the location you want to reach.
Besides
, if you want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speak
with foreigners, you do not
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have to
know their vocabulary,
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just
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use
the translator on your phone and then express your
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idea
.
Thus
, issues in daily activities can overcome without any troubles.

In conclusion
, although social matters may be serious in
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today
life, we seem to deal better with real issues than ever
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 55

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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