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LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT? v.47

LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS. WITH THIS STATEMENT? v. 47
MANY OPPORTUNITIES WILL HAVE PEOPLE THAT DECIDE GO TO ANOTHER COUNTRY, WHERE THEY WILL SPEAK ANOTHER IDIOM, DESPITE OF SOME DIFFICULTIES to ADAPT TO A NEW LIFE. GOING ABROAD CAN GIVE TO THE PEOPLE SPECIAL OPPORTUNITY TO KNOW ABOUT NEW CULTURE AND ALSO MIGHT OPEN THEIR MIND. LEARNING IS IMPORTANT AND REPRESENTS A GOAL FOR MANY, BUT WHO HAVE THE OPTION TO KNOW CLOSE ANOTHER COUNTRY WILL HAVE MUCH MORE SUCCESS. WHAT COULD BE BETTER FOR SOMEONE? TO KNOW ABOUT A PARTICULAR CULTURE OR TO LIVE IN THAT PLACE AND EXPERIMENTING A DIFFERENT WAY OF LIVING. IN MY OPINION CERTAINLY TO BE IN A LOCATION THAT I HAVE the INTEREST TO LEARN ABOUT IS BETTER. FOR EXAMPLE, WHEN SOMEBODY WANTS TO SPEAK ANOTHER LANGUAGE BUT HE IS IN HER OWN COUNTRY THE ABILITY TO SPEAK PROPERLY WILL BE POSSIBLY SLOWER THAN IF THE PERSON GOES TO A PLACE WHERE EVERYONE SPEAKS THAT IDIOM. ON THE OTHER HAND BESIDE TO LIVE IN ANOTHER place CAN OPEN MIND. IT MEANS THAT THIS KIND OF EXPERIENCE WILL BRING CRITICAL THINKING AND ALSO WILL CHANGE THE WAY THAT A PERSON LIVES, BECAUSE OF THE GROWING KNOWLEDGE. AS A RESULT of SOME THAT HAD A ABROAD LIVE COULD BE MORE PRODUCTIVE IN A COMPANy AND ALSO COULD BECOME A OWNER IN ANOTHER PLACE OR even IN HIS HOMETOWN. FOR INSTANCE, SOME WELL KNOWN COMPANIES SUCH AS COCA-COLA WAS CREATED BY MANAGERS THAT HAD A DIFFERENT MINDSET ABOUT THE WORLD. TO CONCLUDE, GO ABROAD PROBABLY WILL BRING MORE KNOWLEDGE AND ALSO A CREATIVE THINKING THAN ISSUES. EVENTHOUGH IT IS A CHALLENGE BUT WILL END UP BEING A WELL SUCCEED EXPERIENCE.
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MANY
OPPORTUNITIES WILL HAVE
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PEOPLE
THAT DECIDE GO TO ANOTHER COUNTRY, WHERE THEY WILL
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SPEAK
ANOTHER IDIOM,
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DESPITE OF
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SOME
DIFFICULTIES to ADAPT TO A NEW LIFE. GOING ABROAD CAN GIVE TO THE
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PEOPLE
SPECIAL OPPORTUNITY TO KNOW ABOUT NEW CULTURE AND
ALSO
MIGHT OPEN THEIR MIND.

LEARNING IS
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IMPORTANT
AND REPRESENTS A GOAL FOR
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MANY
,
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BUT
WHO HAVE THE OPTION TO KNOW CLOSE ANOTHER COUNTRY WILL HAVE MUCH MORE SUCCESS. WHAT COULD BE BETTER FOR SOMEONE? TO KNOW ABOUT A PARTICULAR CULTURE OR TO
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LIVE
IN THAT
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PLACE
AND EXPERIMENTING A
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DIFFERENT
WAY OF LIVING. IN MY OPINION
CERTAINLY
TO BE IN A LOCATION THAT I HAVE the INTEREST TO LEARN ABOUT IS BETTER.
FOR EXAMPLE
, WHEN SOMEBODY WANTS TO
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SPEAK
ANOTHER LANGUAGE
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BUT
HE IS IN HER
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OWN
COUNTRY THE ABILITY TO
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SPEAK
PROPERLY
WILL BE
POSSIBLY
SLOWER THAN IF THE PERSON GOES TO A
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PLACE
WHERE EVERYONE
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SPEAKS
THAT IDIOM.

ON THE OTHER HAND
BESIDE TO
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LIVE
IN ANOTHER
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place
CAN OPEN MIND. IT MEANS THAT THIS KIND OF EXPERIENCE WILL BRING CRITICAL THINKING AND
ALSO
WILL
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CHANGE
THE WAY THAT A PERSON
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LIVES
,
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BECAUSE
OF THE GROWING KNOWLEDGE.
AS A RESULT
of
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SOME
THAT HAD A ABROAD
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LIVE
COULD BE MORE PRODUCTIVE IN A
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COMPANy
AND
ALSO
COULD BECOME A OWNER IN ANOTHER
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PLACE
OR even IN HIS HOMETOWN.
FOR INSTANCE
,
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SOME
WELL KNOWN
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COMPANIES
SUCH AS COCA-COLA
WAS CREATED
BY MANAGERS THAT HAD A
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DIFFERENT
MINDSET ABOUT THE WORLD.

TO CONCLUDE
, GO ABROAD
PROBABLY
WILL BRING MORE KNOWLEDGE AND
ALSO
A CREATIVE THINKING THAN ISSUES.
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EVENTHOUGH
IT IS A CHALLENGE
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BUT
WILL
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END
UP BEING A WELL SUCCEED EXPERIENCE.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS. WITH THIS STATEMENT? v. 47

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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