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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.44

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 44
Important social and practical problems may arise when individuals live or travel to a foreign nation where they do not know the local language. It is disagreed that This essay totally disagrees with this statement because firstly people use more sign languages to communicate and secondly, most of the countries treat foreigners as a valued guest. It has been studied that more than sixty percentages of human communications happen through gesture language. Sign languages are the same in all over the world. For example, thumbs up means good luck or all the best in everywhere. Similarly, shaking or nodding head means same in all nations. However, knowing foreign tongues give extra advantages to communicate and learning foreign culture easily. Another reason to disagree is that most of the countries are very hospitable toward tourists. Foreigners get much more time to learn the local culture and people take it liberally when a traveller makes any mistake. Such things happen a lot in every tourist place and there are lots of video and news about it. For instance, hugging or handshaking with a woman is not a good idea in few middle east countries, but one French tourist kissed one of the shopkeepers in Beirut and it created a misunderstanding situation. Yet, later that lady forgives that tourist and everything became calm. Nevertheless, it is always better to know the local culture and at least a few phrases to communicate before travel to a new destination. Even this rule applies to move inside the same country. In conclusion, language is not a serious problem while living or travel different countries as sing languages have the same meaning in all countries and people usually show good behaviour to the foreign people. It is predicted that the tourism industries are at a peak in the last three or four decades because people finds communication is easy.
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social and practical problems may arise when individuals
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live
or travel to a
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foreign
nation where they do not know the local
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language
. It
is disagreed
that This essay
totally
disagrees with this statement
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because
firstly
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people
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use
more
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sign
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languages
to communicate and
secondly
, most of the
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countries
treat foreigners as a valued guest.

It has
been studied
that more than sixty percentages of human communications happen through gesture
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language
.
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Sign
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languages
are the same in all over the world.
For example
, thumbs up means
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good
luck or all the best in everywhere.
Similarly
, shaking or nodding head means same in all nations.
However
, knowing
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foreign
tongues give extra advantages to communicate and learning
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foreign
culture
easily
.

Another reason to disagree is that most of the
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countries
are
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very
hospitable toward
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tourists
. Foreigners
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get
much more time to learn the local culture and
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people
take it
liberally
when a
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traveller
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makes
any mistake. Such things happen a lot in every
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tourist
place and there are lots of video and news about it.
For instance
, hugging or handshaking with a woman is not a
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good
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idea
in few
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middle east
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countries
,
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but
one French
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tourist
kissed one of the shopkeepers in Beirut and it created a misunderstanding situation.
Yet
, later that lady forgives that
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tourist
and everything became calm.
Nevertheless
, it is always better to know the local culture and at least a few phrases to communicate
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before
travel to a new destination. Even this
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rule
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applies to
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move
inside the same country.

In conclusion
,
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language
is not a serious problem while living or travel
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different
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countries
as sing
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languages
have the same meaning in all
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countries
and
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people
usually
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show
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good
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behaviour
to the
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foreign
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people
. It
is predicted
that the tourism industries are at a peak in the last three or four decades
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because
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
finds
communication is easy.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 44

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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