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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend you you agree or disagree with this statement. v.42

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. v. 42
Staying in a nation where the human does not understand the provincial's mother tongue can result in various kinds of issues, such as, disruption of their social activity and daily practical works. In my opinion, I completely agree because it causes misunderstanding with the local people and poor social growth. Firstly, expats would encounter issues like interpreting the sign or verbal language on a daily basis, if a man is not fully familiar with the local knowledge. It can also result in locals getting offended because of the different signs or the gesture means differently in a lot of territory. Furthermore, people can end up in a dispute and would lead to a bad experience for the individual of the other state. For example, the word Goodbye signifies in the positive and the negative way in India and China respectively. If an Indian citizen uses the same word in China, it can result in a negative way. Secondly, a character would face trouble in socializing with the local community, as there can be a possibility that they can be neglected, due to their poor language skills and it can also further lead also further leads to the individual going into isolation. Due to this, it would lead to frustration and disappointment in their activity, which can affect them psychologically. Hence, it would have a disastrous impact on the quality of growth and they can make a decision to depart from the provincial. For instance, in France, the locals do not prefer to mix with the individual, unless they are good at french. Because of this, a woman, who comes with the hope of spending a high standard of living without the proper local language feels desolated and sometimes they leave the home. In conclusion, there are numerous difficulties, such as, incorrect understanding and poor public soul, if humans do not learn the dialect of a particular province. Given the situation, I strongly agree that a character should give prime importance to learn the mother tongue of each agrarian, wherever they live.
Staying in a nation where the human does not understand the provincial's mother tongue can result in various kinds of issues, such as, disruption of their social activity and daily practical works. In my opinion, I completely
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local
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people
and poor social growth.

Firstly
, expats would encounter issues like interpreting the
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sign
or verbal language on a daily basis, if a
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man
is not
fully
familiar with the
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local
knowledge. It can
also
result in
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locals
getting offended
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because
of the
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different
signs or the gesture means
differently
in
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a lot of
territory.
Furthermore
,
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people
can
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end
up in a dispute and would
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lead
to a
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bad
experience for the individual of the other state.
For example
, the word Goodbye signifies in the
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positive
and the
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negative
way in India and China
respectively
. If an Indian citizen
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uses
the same word in China, it can result in a
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negative
way.

Secondly
, a character would face trouble in socializing with the
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local
community, as there can be a possibility that they can
be neglected
, due to their poor language
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skills
and it can
also
further
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lead
also
further
leads to the individual going into isolation. Due to this, it would
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lead
to frustration and disappointment in their activity, which can affect them
psychologically
.
Hence
, it would have a disastrous impact on the quality of
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growth and
they can
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make
a decision to depart from the provincial.
For instance
, in France, the
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locals
do not prefer to mix with the individual, unless they are
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good
at
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french
.
Because of this
, a woman, who
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comes
with the hope of spending a high standard of living without the proper
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local
language feels desolated and
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sometimes
they
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leave
the home.

In conclusion
, there are numerous difficulties, such as, incorrect understanding and poor public soul, if humans do not learn the dialect of a particular province.
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Given
the situation, I
strongly
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agree
that a character should give prime importance to learn the mother tongue of each agrarian, wherever they
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live
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. v. 42

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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