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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.41

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 41
Communicating in a foreign language will be difficult for many people and may lead to some community problems. Others also have some trouble at practical problems. In my opinion, I totally agree with this issue and this essay will be discussed about those problems. On the one hand, there are several problems that affect directly to the social. To begin with, linguistic barrier would be a serious thing because many tourists or people, who come from the other countries, are not able to learn the language of the country they want to go or travel to. It will lead to the difficulties in communicating with the native speaker. Besides, if we know English the most common language in the world, we can communicate more easily, but it will be misunderstood in some situation. For example, people will not understand each other in some situations due to English not the language the use often, but it is the best way to help people talk to each other without learning too many languages. On the other hand, linguistic barrier prevents the people in finding the tourist attraction or some famous place in that city and they will have a lot of difficulty in shopping, due to not understanding the information on the product’s packaging. Then some tourists who have less experience, are unaware of the actual values of the item, so the seller will put up for sales higher than the real price that they sell to the native speaker. For instance, there is a case that a couple of foreigners go to the street market to buy a hat which they had to pay about 8 USD, but the actual fact that its price just 2 USD. To sum up, from my personal experience people should educate themselves in order to know to behave in different situations with different cultures and need to learn the most common language in the world to communicate easier.
Communicating in a foreign
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language
will be difficult for
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many
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people
and may lead to
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some
community problems. Others
also
have
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some
trouble at practical problems. In my opinion, I
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agree
with this issue and this essay will be
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discussed about those
problems.

On the one hand, there are several problems that affect
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to the social. To
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begin
with, linguistic barrier would be a serious thing
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because
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many
tourists or
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people
, who
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come
from the
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other
countries, are not able to learn the
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language
of the country they want to go or travel to. It will lead to the difficulties in communicating with the native speaker.
Besides
, if we know English the most common
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language
in the world, we can communicate more
easily
,
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but
it will be misunderstood in
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some
situation.
For example
,
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people
will not understand each
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other
in
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some
situations due to English not the
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language
the
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use
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often
,
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it is the best way to
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help
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people
talk to each
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other
without learning too
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many
languages.

On the
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hand, linguistic barrier
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prevents
the
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people
in finding the tourist attraction or
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some
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famous
place in that
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city and
they will have
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difficulty in shopping, due to not understanding the information on the product’s packaging. Then
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some
tourists who have less experience, are unaware of the actual values of the item,
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so
the seller will put up for sales higher than the real price that they sell to the native speaker.
For instance
, there is a case that a couple of foreigners
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go
to the street market to
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buy
a hat which they had to pay about 8 USD,
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but
the actual fact that its price
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just
2 USD.

To sum up, from my personal experience
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people
should educate themselves in order to know to behave in
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different
situations with
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different
cultures and need to learn the most common
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language
in the world to communicate easier.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 41

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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