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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.4

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 4
In present day society, due to the staggering advancement of technology and transport systems, it is common for people to travel to different countries or study and work oversea. Some people believe that the language barriers will engender many social problems, while I disagree with this view because of the proliferation of the internet and the widespread use of some dominant languages nowadays. People tend to attend prestigious universities to gain better job prospects in their later lives in most Asian countries, so there are numerous language learning courses available on the websites for the public. People have easy access to study foreign languages and can improve their speaking skills or communicated skills wherever they want. Moreover, if individuals have difficulties to understand or speak foreign languages, they can also use the translation tools such as google or online dictionaries to help them communicate with the local residents. With all these online resources on the Internet, people may adapt themselves to the new countries easier. In addition, owing to the accelerated rate of globalization of economic, cultural or political areas, it is imperative for people to learn second language. For example, there are a number of English news coverage broadcasted on TV channels in Taiwan, which give people a chance to familiar with foreign languages. Children in Taiwan are also forced to learn English because most important textbooks or journals are both written in English. As for the older generations, it would not be possible for them to memorize or learn second language because of their physical conditions, but they can make good use of body language when traveling or living in other nations. In my opinion, to learn or speak a foreign is not that easy but people can acquire more knowledge and skills through the Internet or by using appropriate body language. This will help individuals not only deal with problems in their lives but also improve their personal language ability.
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people
to travel to
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different
countries or study and work oversea.
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people
believe that the
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language
barriers will engender
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many
social problems, while I disagree with this view
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because
of the proliferation of the internet and the widespread
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use
of
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some
dominant
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languages
nowadays.

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People
tend to attend prestigious universities to gain better job prospects in their later
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lives
in most Asian countries,
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so
there are numerous
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language
learning courses available on the websites for the public.
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People
have easy access to study
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foreign
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languages
and can
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improve
their speaking
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skills
or communicated
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skills
wherever they want.
Moreover
, if individuals have difficulties to understand or speak
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foreign
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languages
, they can
also
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use
the translation tools such as google or online dictionaries to
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help
them communicate with the local residents. With all these online resources on the Internet,
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people
may adapt themselves to the new countries easier.

In addition
, owing to the accelerated rate of globalization of economic, cultural or political areas, it is imperative for
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people
to
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learn
second
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language
.
For example
, there are a number of English news coverage broadcasted on TV channels in Taiwan, which give
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people
a chance to familiar with
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foreign
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languages
. Children in Taiwan are
also
forced to
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learn
English
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because
most
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important
textbooks or journals are both written in English. As for the older generations, it would not be possible for them to memorize or
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learn
second
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language
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because
of their physical conditions,
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but
they can
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make
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good
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of body
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language
when traveling or living in other nations.

In my opinion, to
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learn
or speak a
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foreign
is not that easy
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but
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people
can acquire more knowledge and
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skills
through the Internet or by using appropriate body
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language
. This will
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help
individuals not
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only
deal with problems in their
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lives
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also
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improve
their personal
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language
ability.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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