Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.38

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 38
Many people choose to migrate to other countries in search of better opportunities and living environments. Opting for a country where you have to use a totally new language may lead issues in social and practical scenarios, but these problems are not so difficult that they may not be solved. Firstly, migration is a common trend for people from different backgrounds and all of us face various issues due to a language barrier. This can vary from misunderstanding talking with locals to talking with your co-workers. For example, ordering a taxi or buying groceries at a local shop can be a huge task. Secondly, language speaks the soul of the culture and the country. Therefore, not being a native may leave you as an outcast in some situations. For example, you may not be able to get the joke that your colleagues are making and it can make you feel isolated. Moreover, you could lose many prestigious offers due to the language barrier. It can be a hindrance for you in your career and personal growth. However, these issues are short-term problems which can be solved with the touch of technology and friends. Nowadays, technology offers us numerous opportunities for excelling in any subject. By using different internet resources and applications, we can start learning the local language and feel more confident in our language skills. For example, by using Google translate we can break the ice with local shop owners. It can help us to build our first sentences and feel more native. Furthermore, we can do a thorough research about the country before we decide to move in. This can also help us to handle difficult situations and deal with culture shock better. Additionally, having local friends may be extremely beneficial to improve your spoken skills. In a nutshell, I strongly believe that language barriers can cause many hardships for us while residing in a different country. However, not being permanent, these problems can be tackled with the right help and attitude.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
choose to migrate to other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
in search of better opportunities and living environments. Opting for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
where you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a
totally
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
may lead issues in social and practical scenarios,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
these problems are not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
difficult that they may not
be solved
.

Firstly
, migration is a common trend for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
backgrounds and all of us face various issues due to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
barrier. This can vary from misunderstanding talking with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
locals
to talking with your co-workers.
For example
, ordering a taxi or buying groceries at a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
shop can be a huge task.

Secondly
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
speaks the soul of the culture and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
Therefore
, not being a native may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
you as an outcast in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
situations.
For example
, you may not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the joke that your colleagues are making and it can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you feel isolated.

Moreover
, you could lose
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
prestigious offers due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
barrier. It can be a hindrance for you in your career and personal growth.

However
, these issues are short-term problems which can
be solved
with the touch of technology and friends. Nowadays, technology offers us numerous opportunities for excelling in any subject. By using
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
internet resources and applications, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and feel more confident in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
For example
, by using
Did you mean "Google Translate"?
Google translate
we can break the ice with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
shop owners. It can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us to build our
first
sentences and feel more native.
Furthermore
, we can do a thorough research about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
we decide to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
in. This can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
us to handle difficult situations and deal with culture shock better.
Additionally
, having
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
friends may be
extremely
beneficial to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your spoken
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

In a nutshell, I
strongly
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
barriers can cause
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
hardships for us while residing in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
However
, not being permanent, these problems can
be tackled
with the right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and attitude.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 38

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
334 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts