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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.37

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 37
Every country has its own language. This arrangement can cause some difficulties to a person who moves to a foreign country and has to speak a foreign language. While I do admit that this can be quite challenging in the first few weeks, in my opinion, most people will overcome the language barrier fairly quickly. There is no doubt that language is the first problem that an immigrant faces in the foreign land. Not being able to speak the native jargons can affect their ability to socialise and make friends. It can also affect their work efficiency because they are not able to give or take instructions. Going shopping, getting medical help or asking for directions can be equally challenging for someone who does not speak or understand the native language. However, in my opinion, none of these difficulties cause any serious issues because any language can be learned with a little effort. One thing that makes life easier for immigrants is the universal acceptance of English. More than 70% of the world population have at least a working knowledge of English. This knowledge is more than enough to survive the first few weeks in a foreign country. Even in countries like Russia, Japan or China where English is not spoken widely, it is still possible to find people who can read, write and speak it reasonably well. Also, in order to learn a new language we only have to get exposed to it. If we hear a new language regularly or all the time, our brain will automatically pick it up. For this reason, learning a foreign language in a foreign country is actually easier than learning it while we are still in our country. Also, people who are interested in moving abroad can do themselves a favour and learn at least the basics of the foreign language because packing their bags. To conclude, many people believe that having to converse in a foreign language can cause problems for immigrants; however, in my opinion, this is not a big issue because with a little effort most people can learn the foreign language and adapt to the new environment within a few weeks.
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. This arrangement can cause
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difficulties to a person
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to a
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and
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has to
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speak
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language
. While I do admit that this can be quite challenging in the
first
few weeks, in my opinion, most
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people
will overcome the
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language
barrier
fairly
quickly
.

There is no doubt that
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language
is the
first
problem that an immigrant faces in the
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foreign
land. Not being able to
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speak
the native
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jargons can
affect their ability to
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socialise
and
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make
friends. It can
also
affect their work efficiency
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because
they are not able to give or take instructions. Going shopping, getting medical
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help
or asking for directions can be
equally
challenging for someone
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who
does not
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speak
or understand the native
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language
.
However
, in my opinion, none of these difficulties cause any serious issues
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because
any
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with a
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effort.

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makes
life easier for immigrants is the universal acceptance of English. More than 70% of the world population have at least a working knowledge of English. This knowledge is more than
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enough
to survive the
first
few weeks in a
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foreign
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country
. Even in
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countries
like Russia, Japan or China where English is not spoken
widely
, it is
still
possible to find
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people
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who
can read, write and
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speak
it
reasonably
well.

Also
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language
we
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exposed to it. If we hear a new
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regularly
or all the time, our brain will
automatically
pick it up.
For this reason
, learning a
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foreign
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language
in a
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foreign
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country
is actually easier than learning it while we are
still
in our
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country
.
Also
,
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people
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who
are interested
in moving abroad can do themselves a
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favour
and learn at least the basics of the
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foreign
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language
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because
packing their bags.

To conclude
,
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many
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people
believe that having to converse in a
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foreign
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language
can cause problems for immigrants;
however
, in my opinion, this is not a
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big
issue
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because
with a
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little
effort most
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people
can learn the
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foreign
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language
and adapt to the new environment within a few weeks.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 37

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
363 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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