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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.34

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 34
Numerous number of people try to migrate to one of the developed countries to seek a better lifestyle. This can cause a challenge for the migrant workers or foreign students as they try to equip themselves with the native language and establish a bridge of social interaction with its people. This essay will discuss why I believe this can cause communication gaps between foreign and native people. In terms of migrant workers, they need to obtain a certain level of proficiency as they are required to communicate with their customers and most importantly, their colleagues. To cope this issue, many nations created levels of proficiency of their language as training courses and certificates. For example, the german labour ministry requires at least a B1 level proficiency of the german language from its Goethe institutes before submitting any job application. Another situation where it can create barriers in communities, when people who are familiar with the language, but have little knowledge with the accents, idioms, and choosing the wrong formality of words. This may be a reason for the lose of persons' self-esteem and confidence. For example, when an Arabic worker who has a vast experience in his field, but with the misunderstood accent and the wrong forms of sentences when translating his own words to other personnels, it may lead to interactions partition as a result. In conclusion, it is always advisable to speak in the language which is prevalent in the society where ever you live. It helps to make the interaction with others and transmission of information in a better way.
Numerous number of
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people
try to migrate to one of the
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developed countries
to seek a better lifestyle. This can cause a challenge for the migrant workers or foreign students as they try to equip themselves with the native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and establish a bridge of social interaction with its
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people
. This essay will discuss why I believe this can cause communication gaps between foreign and native
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people
.

In terms of migrant workers, they need to obtain a certain level of proficiency as they
are required
to communicate with their customers and most
importantly
, their colleagues. To cope this issue,
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many
nations created levels of proficiency of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
as training courses and certificates.
For example
, the
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german
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labour
ministry requires at least a B1 level proficiency of the
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german
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
from its Goethe institutes
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before
submitting any job application.

Another situation where it can create barriers in communities, when
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are familiar with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
,
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but
have
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little
knowledge with the accents, idioms, and choosing the
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wrong
formality of words. This may be a reason for the
Did you mean "loose" (adjective) or "loss" (noun)?
lose
of persons' self-esteem and confidence.
For example
, when an Arabic worker who has a vast experience in his field,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
with the misunderstood accent and the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
forms of sentences when translating his
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own
words to other
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "personnel", the plural form of the noun 'personnel'?
personnels
, it may lead to interactions partition
as a result
.

In conclusion
, it is always advisable to speak in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
which is prevalent in the society where ever you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. It
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helps
to
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make
the interaction with others and transmission of information in a better way.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 34

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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