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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.32

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 32
Some people think that by living in non-native countries, people will face different problems such as personal issues as well as social. While others think that it's not a serious at all. I completely disagree with the statement because the awareness and knowledge of the various skills they tend to learn before they relocate. Firstly, people travelling from other countries have learnt the basic language skills of their destination cities. Since they already aware of the host place, everyone learning the standards, process, and their culture of that place. For instance, employees coming on deputation to their client countries they already proved candidates to work at their customer location. Additionally, most of the countries have the restrictions on the other country citizens to study and work in their countries. For students who wish to study their post-graduation courses in aborad they have gained minimum band criteria in language ability tests. By considering these abilities, it's not a major issue for their personal and day-to-day life in abroad. Secondly, in case of social awareness and cultures of the foreign countries, by far most of the countries have some identical and common way to socialize and to communicate over various platforms. At least 60 percentage of social activities and festivals are common and by the international standard education system most of the students come to know about the various cultures. However, almost in countries immigrants are searching for their native communities and they eager to establish more communication channels to interact with their home country citizen. So, by considering all these scenario's it won't have nay impact on the social aspect as well. To conclude, since immigrants are already aware of their destination cultures and the communication channel system and by having their own home based communities its easier for the non-citizens and refugee's to live in an English speaking country, In other words, where they do not have their native language as a primary one.
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people
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think
that by living in non-native
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countries
,
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people
will face
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different
problems such as personal issues
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social
.
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others
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think
that it's not a serious at all. I completely disagree with the statement
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because
the awareness and knowledge of the various
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skills
they tend to learn
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before
they relocate.

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,
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people
travelling from
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other
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countries
have
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learnt
the basic language
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skills
of their destination cities. Since they already aware of the host place, everyone learning the standards, process, and their
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culture
of that place.
For instance
, employees coming on deputation to their client
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countries
they already proved candidates to work at their customer location.
Additionally
, most of the
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countries
have the restrictions on the
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other
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country
citizens to study and work in their
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countries
. For students who wish to study their post-graduation courses in
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aborad
they have gained minimum band criteria in language ability
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tests
. By considering these abilities, it's not a major issue for their personal and day-to-day life in abroad.

Secondly
, in case of
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social
awareness and
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cultures
of the foreign
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countries
, by far most of the
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countries
have
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some
identical and common way to socialize and to communicate over various platforms. At least 60 percentage of
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social
activities and festivals are common and by the international standard education system most of the students
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come
to know about the various
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cultures
.
However
, almost in
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countries
immigrants are searching for their native
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communities and
they eager to establish more communication channels to interact with their home
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country
citizen.
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So
, by considering all
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these scenario
's it won't have nay impact on the
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social
aspect
as well
.

To conclude
, since immigrants are already aware of their destination
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cultures
and the communication channel system and by having their
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own
home based communities its easier for the non-citizens and refugee's to
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live
in an
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English speaking
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country
, In
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other
words, where they do not have their native language as a primary one.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement? v. 32

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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