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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement v.29

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems with this statement v. 29
Residing overseas and having to converse in a different language than one’s native tongue, can lead to severe social issues as well as everyday challenges. I totally agree with this because it can lead to social isolation and day-to-day difficulties. The main reason I agree is because of the serious issues with social isolation. If a person is unable to effectively interact with local people in the surrounding area that they reside in they are likely to feel isolated. This is because intimate relationships require effective communication and this is extremely challenging when one doesn’t have full command over the language being spoken. This situation can lead to people feeling disconnected from one’s community. In some instances, this may even lead to depression and other mental illnesses that can be destructive to the fabric of society. In addition, not having full expertise over the language spoken in the country you are living in can lead to practical issues. Many everyday tasks assume that you have a know the language. More specifically, instructions for public transportation and other social services are often only provided in the native language of an area. This can lead to challenges in using and accessing services. For example, when I was on holiday in Thailand I found it extremely difficult to understand where ferries were going because the detailed instructions were only available in Thai. In conclusion, I totally agree that having to speak a foreign language leads to issues in the society and day-to-day level. This is because it’s difficult to connect to people in meaningful ways and because many day-to-day services are not easily understood without full command of the language used to describe those services. Therefore, it is strongly recommended to be aware of these issues in advance and to build strategies to deal with them.
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social
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issues
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agree
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issues
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If
a person is unable to
effectively
interact with local
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people
in the surrounding area that they reside in they are likely to feel isolated. This is
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because
intimate relationships require effective communication and this is
extremely
challenging when one doesn’t have full command over the
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language
being spoken
. This situation can
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lead
to
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people
feeling disconnected from one’s community. In
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some
instances, this may even
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lead
to depression and other mental illnesses that can be destructive to the fabric of society.

In addition
, not having full expertise over the
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language
spoken in the country you are living in can
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lead
to practical
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issues
.
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Many
everyday tasks assume that you have a know the
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language
. More
specifically
, instructions for public transportation and other
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social
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services
are
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often
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only
provided in the native
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language
of an area. This can
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lead
to challenges in using and accessing
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services
.
For example
, when I was on holiday in Thailand I found it
extremely
difficult to understand where ferries were going
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because
the detailed instructions were
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only
available in Thai.

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, I
totally
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that having to speak a foreign
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language
leads to
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issues
in the society and day-to-day level. This is
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because
it’s difficult to connect to
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people
in meaningful ways and
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because
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many
day-to-day
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services
are not
easily
understood without full command of the
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language
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describe
those
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services
.
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, it is
strongly
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recommended to be
aware of these
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issues
in advance and to build strategies to deal with them.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems with this statement v. 29

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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