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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.27

First of all, I would like to say that the statement that living in a foreign country, where you have to speak a foreign language can cause many problems. It may cause serious social as well as practical problems. In my opinion the one who can not speak a foreign language may face trouble in communicating with others and while listing to someone. It may lead to serious social problem like language barrier while making a talk with his peers, However the second most serious problem is they can not able to read the correct sentences. The one who is living in a foreign country has many difficulties like he can not understands the language of native english speaker And at the same time he can not able to communicate in a proper way with others. And its not a rule that they should be polity with fellow members in the surrounding areas were he lives. And while coming in to practical problem is that the one who do not knows the foreign language may face a serious problem while searching for a job in foreign countries. And here the ones may face many issues at the time of interview selection. Here it can leads to plenty of drawbacks to work as part time job holder. To sum up, I agree with the given statement that while leaving for a foreign/english speaking language country one should learn the culture and language of other countries.
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, I would like to say that the statement that living in a
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country
, where you
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can cause
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many
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problems
. It may cause
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serious
social
as well
as practical
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problems
. In my opinion the one who can not speak a
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foreign
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language
may face trouble in communicating with others and while listing to someone. It may lead to
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serious
social
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problem
like
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language
barrier while making a talk with his peers,
However
the second most
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serious
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problem
is they can not able to read the correct sentences. The one who is living in a
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foreign
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country
has
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many
difficulties like he can not
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understands
the
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language
of native
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english
speaker And at the same time he can not able to communicate
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in a proper way
with others. And
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lives
. And while coming in to practical
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problem
is that the one who do not
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the
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foreign
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language
may face a
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serious
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problem
while searching for a job in
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foreign
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countries
.
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And
here the ones may face
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many
issues at the time of interview selection. Here it can
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leads
to
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plenty
of drawbacks to work as
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part time
job holder. To sum up, I
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agree
with the
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given
statement that while leaving for a foreign/
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english
speaking
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language
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country
one should learn the culture and
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language
of other
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IELTS essay living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with the statement?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
244 words
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